Another writing course that I am taking is in video form, which makes it easier to take simultaneously with the other course that I mentioned in my previous post.
The name of the class is Write. Publish. Repeat. Conversations. The course is part 2 of a book of the same name minus the "Conversations". Johnny B. Truant, Sean Platt and David W. Wright are the instructors of the class as well as the authors of the book. These full-time, self-published storytellers are currently my heroes. They are primarily fiction authors of so many books I can't keep up with the number. They write across pretty much all of the genres at break neck speed. I think they wrote a million words last year.
Johnny, Sean and Dave also share their writing journey in non-fiction work with readers of their books and listeners of their podcasts. Which is what they've done in the Udemy.com class mentioned above. There are a total of 30 videos and I am half way through them.
I'm sure I'll learn a lot from these guys because they write their butts off and their fans love them (myself included). To learn more about this writing team, go to SterlingandStone.net (not .com~that's jewelry and whatnot.)
When I am done with this course, I will move on to Planning & Outlining Novels Using Scrivener. Sean Platt is the instructor of that class.
What about you? Do you or have you taken a writing course? If so, which one? Was it helpful?
This is all for today. Happy Writing.
I'll holler!
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Monday, December 8, 2014
Sunday, November 30, 2014
NaNoWriMo 2014 is almost over ~ Now what?
Today is the last
day of NaNoWriMo and as I mentioned before, I have not reached the goal of
50,000. I am not sad about it because it
will be a great novella once I finish it so it's all good. Now what?
Reading...
December is going to
be my resting phase, well for writing but I plan to do a lot of reading by the
end of the year. Novels are my favorite
of course but I have number of non fiction books on my list. Plus I'm going to
be taking a writing class or two. I will
get into more detail about the classes at a later date.
Writing...
In January, I will
be back to writing or at least editing my works in progress. It's my plan to have the first book in my
Sassy Johnson series ready for publication by April 2015. It's going to take a
couple of rewrites and professional edits to get to that point but I think it
will be down by then.
Blogging…
I do plan to keep
blogging. As a matter of fact I may challenge myself to write at least 100
posts in 2015. I think the best way for
me to do that would be to write a few posts at a time and schedule them to
upload once or twice a week.
I thought about
starting a new blog as well. Blogger has been good to me but I want to have my
own domain. When I decide on a theme or
niche I'll work on creating the new site but in the mean time, I will be here.
What about you?
Congrats to those that met or exceeded the goal and good luck to those who fell short because you can always continue the story at a later time. I hope you all had a great time during NaNo regardless of your status.
Happy Writing. I'll holler.
Thursday, November 13, 2014
NaNoWriMo 2014 ~ Day 13
I haven't had this hard of a time writing since 2009. The story premise is great but I just can't seem to flesh it out. My muse has been telling me to finish editing the stories that I have already done.
Fine time to tell me but I was probably ignoring him anyway. I was doing my own thing. Now I need him, but he won't help me.
When I ask for some ideas or inspiration, he pretends that he doesn't hear me at first. Then he's like, "You talking to me? I thought you knew what you were doing." God, I hate that guy sometimes.
I'm thinking he may be right though.
Some people may say that this is nothing but self doubt creeping in but honey boom (not boo boo), if you saw all the works in progress that I have you would slap me.
It just occurred to me that maybe this story is supposed to be a short story but I'm trying to make it be something it's not meant to be. That may sound crazy but hey it's just a thought.
Now I don't want to be labeled as a quitter so...
Hey, you don't have to be like me. Keep doing your thing and good luck.
Happy NaNo-ing!
I'll holler.
Fine time to tell me but I was probably ignoring him anyway. I was doing my own thing. Now I need him, but he won't help me.
When I ask for some ideas or inspiration, he pretends that he doesn't hear me at first. Then he's like, "You talking to me? I thought you knew what you were doing." God, I hate that guy sometimes.
I'm thinking he may be right though.
Some people may say that this is nothing but self doubt creeping in but honey boom (not boo boo), if you saw all the works in progress that I have you would slap me.
It just occurred to me that maybe this story is supposed to be a short story but I'm trying to make it be something it's not meant to be. That may sound crazy but hey it's just a thought.
Now I don't want to be labeled as a quitter so...
- I will continue to work on this year's NaNo as much as possible.
- I will not continue to beat myself up over missing word count goals.
- I will start rewriting one of my other novels so I will feel productive.
Hey, you don't have to be like me. Keep doing your thing and good luck.
Happy NaNo-ing!
I'll holler.
Saturday, November 8, 2014
NaNoWriMo 2014 ~ Day 8
I am more than 2000 words behind on my word count and feeling kind of sad about it. It's not like my ideas aren't continuously flowing it's just that I am having a hard time getting an hour to myself to really flesh out my ides. I mean, I'm writing a paragraph here and a sentence there but not enough to meet my daily word count and it's driving me insane. Family, friends and life in general keep begging for my attention and even though I try to tell them that I need a little time to myself, they pretty much ignore me.
During times like this I sit around and try to image how my life will be as a full time writer and I keep coming back to the fact that I will--
a) Always have to wait until everyone leaves the house or goes to sleep to write.
b) Have to leave the house myself and post up at the library or in a freaking parking lot to get some privacy and a piece of mind.
I hope the rest of you are doing well with your word counts. If not just keep going like I plan to. Even if we don't reach 50,000 by November 30, it will be more than we had November 1.
Happy NaNo-ing...
I'll holler
a) Always have to wait until everyone leaves the house or goes to sleep to write.
b) Have to leave the house myself and post up at the library or in a freaking parking lot to get some privacy and a piece of mind.
I hope the rest of you are doing well with your word counts. If not just keep going like I plan to. Even if we don't reach 50,000 by November 30, it will be more than we had November 1.
Happy NaNo-ing...
I'll holler
Tuesday, November 4, 2014
NaNoWriMo 2014 ~ Day 4
I love NaNoWriMo with all my heart, to the moon and back as they say. But, it's driving me crazy all ready. It's my fault though, cause I wasn't as prepared as I should have been.
Note to self and other writers--
Note to self and other writers--
If you are writing a series, be sure to re-read the previous book or books in the series so you won't make stupid mistakes.
Man, I was bringing folks back from the dead, calling folks by the wrong name and not remembering if the character had 6 siblings or 9.
Another good idea to do is have what I'm going to call a post outline. I have an outline that gives me a route that I could go in while I'm writing but I need an outline that documents where I really did take the story. Basically a chapter summary.
This may seem like common sense and I would have said that myself before I saw all of the ooops moments I had.
Whew! End rant...
My total word count is 6050. I was hoping to be at 8000 but crap happens. If (or when) I'm too lazy to let you guys know my status, there is a little box to the left that will show you my total word count. Now sometimes the NaNoWriMo site "be in his feelings" but as soon as I'm able, I do update the total.
I hope that you are doing well with your novel. Happy NaNo-ing!
I'll holler...
Saturday, November 1, 2014
NaNoWriMo 2014 ~ Day 1
I thought about it but I couldn't make myself start writing at Midnight. My outline wasn't done (it's still not done) so I wanted to milk as much time as possible.
My personal goal was between 2000 and 3000 although the official goal is 1667. Guess what I hit 2050 words. It took me all freaking day to do it but it got done by 8:00 pm CST. It feels good because if I stay at this pace, I will finish NaNoWriMo by November 25, which would feel really good.
I believe I did a no no today. I started my novel with the character waking up. Now she was dreaming about sexy men and woke up in the arms of her even sexier boyfriend. That's a good thing, right?
How was your first day? Let me know. And also, is there a such thing as too much tea? Really? I didn't think so.

I believe I did a no no today. I started my novel with the character waking up. Now she was dreaming about sexy men and woke up in the arms of her even sexier boyfriend. That's a good thing, right?
How was your first day? Let me know. And also, is there a such thing as too much tea? Really? I didn't think so.
Saturday, October 18, 2014
Let's Do This NaNoWriMo Again
It's really a shame that I haven't blogged since last year during NaNoWriMo. And what's even sadder is that I didn't even let you guys know if I won or not. Well...
I wrote over 51,000 words of the second novel in the Sassy Johnson series. This year I'll be doing number three. My plan is to write 75,000 words this year, which means I have to do around 2,666 words a day. Now if I do that for the entire 30 days, I will have a whopping 79,980 by the end of the month.
This goal is pretty ambitious but I think I can do it, or get pretty damn close.
I've drafted a working outline, that I'm pretty happy with but I'm sure will get tweaked here and there as the story unfolds.
Well that's enough messing around, let's get to work planning these magnificent novels we are going to write next month.
Until later, I'll holler.
Saturday, November 16, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 16 Update
Hey good people. I just wanted to let you guys know that I am still in the NaNoWriMo game. My total word count is 27235. Like I mentioned earlier on Twitter, I am falling in love with my main character all over again. Every time I read my outline and try to flesh out that part of the story, Sassy jumps in and tells me that's not it. I mean, sometimes I'm headed in the right direction and sometimes I'm way off. So, I'm letting her tell the story the way she wants to.
For those that don't understand where I'm coming from, I'm sure that sounds like a crazy person talking about an imaginary person whom she thinks is real. There's more to it than that. When you know your characters. When you know what they will and won't do, you start to really see things through their eyes.
At this point I would normally leave an excerpt but I won't this time. If you want an excerpt, leave me a comment, otherwise I'll keep them to myself.
I really believe in this story. I haven't felt like this about anything I've written in a long time and it feels good. This story is meant to be the second book in a series I started back in 2009 but I think I like this one better than the first one. Guess that means that when November is over, I'll let this story rest and finish editing the first one.
Thanks for taking the time to read this. Until next time--I'll holler!
For those that don't understand where I'm coming from, I'm sure that sounds like a crazy person talking about an imaginary person whom she thinks is real. There's more to it than that. When you know your characters. When you know what they will and won't do, you start to really see things through their eyes.
At this point I would normally leave an excerpt but I won't this time. If you want an excerpt, leave me a comment, otherwise I'll keep them to myself.
I really believe in this story. I haven't felt like this about anything I've written in a long time and it feels good. This story is meant to be the second book in a series I started back in 2009 but I think I like this one better than the first one. Guess that means that when November is over, I'll let this story rest and finish editing the first one.
Thanks for taking the time to read this. Until next time--I'll holler!
Monday, November 11, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 11
Happy Veteran's Day!! Yeah, I'm kind of late but better late than never. Anyway...
Today I wrote 1721 words. If the kids did not get the same off day I could have easily written over 3000, maybe. As of now, my total word count is 18577. I can't believe I am so close to the mid point but I guess that's about right. Almost time for the climax of the story. Got a couple ideas for it but I'm sure I will be able to choose by the time I make it to 25000.
Enough gibberish, give the people what they want--Excerpt please.
Today I wrote 1721 words. If the kids did not get the same off day I could have easily written over 3000, maybe. As of now, my total word count is 18577. I can't believe I am so close to the mid point but I guess that's about right. Almost time for the climax of the story. Got a couple ideas for it but I'm sure I will be able to choose by the time I make it to 25000.
Enough gibberish, give the people what they want--Excerpt please.
It was raining Jews and Gentiles Saturday morning. I didn’t even go to Jerry’s funeral last year, I just
couldn’t deal with all of the sad faces. So Mrs. Long’s funeral was just like I imagined Jerry’s had been, if not
worse. Jason asked if I wanted him to go
and I told him no. Mrs. Alma demanded to
go so I had no choice unless I wanted to start filing my own paperwork again.
We sat in the back of the church. I felt like running out the door but I held
my composure because I didn’t want to leave without checking on Danny.
When the service was over, it looked as if Cruela attempted
to put her arms around Danny, but he backed away. Black beard, Craig according to the obituary,
grabbed Danny’s arm and said something that didn’t sit very well with my young
friend. I wasn’t surprised to see Danny immediately walk my way.
“Thank
you for coming. I’ve got to get out of
here before someone else ends up in a box.”
“I
understand how you feel. Do you need
anything?”
“Just
do what I asked you to do. That’s all I
need.”
Danny hugged me and walked out. I caught Craig’s eye, he tapped his mom’s
shoulder and gestured towards me. Mrs.
Alma waved and I blew them a kiss. I
think I saw fire and smoke coming out of their heads. Mrs. Alma grabbed my hand, “Come on let’s get
out of here. White folks crazy.”
Unlike my secretary, I did not think all Caucasian people
were crazy. Mrs. Long was very sweet and Mr. Hammer senior seemed to have had a
good heart to look after his illegitimate child. And Johnny Depp was beautiful, but I digress.
When I dropped Mrs. Alma off she asked if I wanted to come
in for a while. I was tempted until saw
her daughter Paris walking down the porch steps. I had already said we would get together in a
couple of days to work on the bridesmaid dress; I still was psyching myself up
for that meeting.
“No
thanks. I think I need to be alone for a while.” She looked at me and I already
knew what that look meant before she said anything.
“It
wasn’t your fault. I know it’s hard but
you’re gonna have to move on.”
“Yes ma’am,
I’m trying to.”
“That
young man needs to step his game up.” I
burst out laughing.
My apartment was nice and cool when I walked in. I was happy that I had forgotten to turn the
air off before I left. I kicked off the
heels, and the other lady like garments followed.
I sat on the side of my bed, naked as the day I was born, and began to
cry. That was my second time crying in
two weeks and it was really getting on my nerves but I couldn’t make it
stop. I took a quick shower and put on a
muu muu. The green light on my phone
blinked continuously. Jason wanted to
know if I was okay. Aunt Essie wanted to know when I was coming to see her.
Mother wanted to know why I didn’t buy her anything at the mall. Melodye wanted to know why I never wanted to
go on shopping sprees when she was around.
Marcus had called to see what I needed help with. I laughed to myself. All those people were vying for my attention
but the one person I wanted was dead and gone and he got more attention than
any of them. I wondered if I needed to
see a therapist.
“Ha,
that’s for crazy folks,” I said heading to the fridge to see what the drink of
the night would be. I chose the oldie
but goodie—Crown and Coke.
I didn’t feel like cooking so I made a bologna sandwich with
two slices of meat, mustard, lettuce, tomato and a few slices of pickle. I poured myself a big cup of water as well. Since I planned to go to bed soon, I took my
goodies to my room and put them on the night stand. After a couple of hours of
eating, drinking and watching the Oxygen channel I was too through.
No headache Sunday morning but I definitely had a crick in
my neck from sleeping sitting up instead of lying down like I had some
sense. I had forgotten to call everyone
back but Mrs. Alma called before I could decide who to contact first.
“I was
getting ready for church so I decided that I would check on the sick and
shut-in.”
“I’m
good, thanks for caring.”
“I was
gonna ask have you been drinking but I don’t believe in asking stupid
questions. Have a blessed day.”
She hung up before I could respond, so I texted Jason to let him know I was fine and
that he could come over whenever he got time.
Then I texted Melodye and told her the shopping was spur of the moment
but that we could hang out whenever she wanted.
She could even bring her boo. I
also told her to remind Mother that I had bought her all kind of stuff for
Mother’s Day. Jason texted saying that
he would be over in an hour, so I knew I didn’t have long to get rid of my
funkiness. I decided that I would wait
until Monday to call Marcus back. I
would see if Jason wanted to meet my aunt before I called Aunt Essie.
I was squeaky clean when Jason knocked on the door. He looked at me up and down and smiled. I guess he liked the outfit that I had
on. With everything that had been going
on I had just gotten around to wearing some of the things Harmonye helped me
pick out.
“You
look good.”
“Thanks. What did you want to do today?”
“No
plans, do you have something in mind?”
“Would
you like to meet my aunt? If it weren’t
for her we would have never met.”
“I
would love to meet her but does this mean…”
“One
day at a time sweetie.”
“Yes,
ma’am,” he saluted me. I laughed and
punched him in the shoulder and he howled like a sick dog. One of my neighbors looked out to see what
was going on. I waved at her before
Jason and I headed down the stairs.
I called Auntie Essie before we headed her way just in case
she was gone.
“Hello
darling. It’s about time I heard from
you. How is everything?”
“I’m
good Professor. If you’re up for some
company, I’m headed your way.”
“You’re
always welcomed darling, you know that.”
“There’s
someone I want you to meet. You kind of
fixed us up.”
“Fixed
you up? Darling you know I detest blind dates and I would never set you up on
one.”
“He was
my computer repair guy. He’s awesome.”
“I
would imagine he would have to be to have gotten your attention. Well, he’s quite welcomed as well darling.”
“See
you in a few.”
I put up a thumbs up to Jason and he smiled, then he grabbed
my hand and put one of my fingers in his mouth. “Tasty.”
“Boy
don’t you start nothing.”
Sunday, November 10, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 10
Today I did 1682 which brings my total to 16856. I could have written more but hey it's my off day so I played around a little. I even long into the Twitter account I had made for my main character a few years ago. (@SassySandraJ --If you're interested.) I'm not sure how often I'll be updating her account I guess it depends on how often she tell me to.
Here's an excerpt for today:
Here's an excerpt for today:
I was on the elliptical getting my sweat on when my cell
phone rang. Mrs. Alma had gotten to work
by then so she grabbed it and brought it to me and put it on speaker.
“Run,
your mouth,” I said.
“Sassy,
um, I was calling to give you Ma’s funeral arrangements.” It was Danny. I
hopped down off the elliptical and took the phone from Mrs. Alma. I walked over to my desk and listened as he
told me the information. “Thanks,
sweetie, I really appreciate you calling me.”
“I
could tell that you cared about Ma so I thought you should be able to say goodbye
to her.”
I told him to let me know if he needed anything before we
ended the call. It had been years since
I had been to a funeral and I wasn’t really looking forward to going to another
one but I wanted to do it for Danny.
I went home and took another shower after my workout and
made it back to the office just in time to meet Maurice Bryant in the parking
lot. He said that he recognized me from
my Facebook page. I guess the social
media thing was paying off.
Maurice was a couple inches taller than I with almost the same
build. He was basically a male version
of me and if I didn’t know any better I would have thought we were related.
“You
look a lot nicer in person.”
“I’m
not always that serious. That was my business face.”
We shared a laughed. Dang, we kind of sounded the same. Creepy. Well they did say everyone had a
twin. Maybe Maurice was mine, sort of. I
asked him if he had any more information to tell me about his ex-wife that I
needed to know about.
“Last I
heard she was stripping at some club on Brooks Road,” he said, sitting down
across from me. He handed me a picture
of her. She kind of looked like Lisa
Raye when she played Diamond on Player’s Club.
I am completely heterosexual but I couldn’t help but to notice how her
behind swallowed the red g-string she wore. “Her name is Diane but she goes by Lady D.”
“Okay,
so you’re trying to get custody of your kids. Boy and a girl?”
“Two girls. I don’t want Diane teaching them her
nasty ways. Don’t look at me that
way. I know you think I’m crazy. I know most men would think that this is a
man’s dream come true. But I am a man of
God and I think things like this should be kept in the bedroom.”
Okay, that answered my unspoken question. He didn’t like the fact that his former wife
was shaking her money maker for the masses.
I mean I could see him having an issue with the drugs and maybe even the
alcohol. As far as the dancing, I mean I’m
sure other strippers have raised well rounded children. Maybe…
“Will
you take the case?”
“I’ve
never turned down a challenge.”
I printed out the contract for him to sign and handed it to
him. While Maurice read the paper work,
I went on Facebook and updated my profile picture. I hoped that maybe I would get more business
if I had a happy photo. Maurice put a
cashier’s check on top of the signed form.
I did a double take at the check.
“This
is twice as much as my fee.”
“Think
of it as a tip for having to go into the den of iniquity.”
I shook his hand and walked him to the door. “I’ll see what I can do but didn’t the judge
know that Diane was doing all of these things when you got divorced?”
“That’s
just it. I never had any proof and she
showed up to court looking like the first lady of the church.”
“What
about the flyer?”
“Someone
just sent me that as a sick joke, as if I was interested in such vile things.”
I wanted to burst out laughing but I remained
professional. Brother Maurice wasn’t as
saved as he said he was. I’m sure he
could have looked through photo albums or scrapbooks and found any picture of
Diane but he chose to print out the booty picture. Of course he may have just been trying to
make a point.
Saturday, November 9, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 9
Since today is Saturday, I was hoping to type a whole lot but life got in the way. Anyway, I did pretty good by getting in 1,692 words. This brings my total for NaNoWriMo to 15,174. It's all good baby baby. (In my Biggie voice)
He's an excerpt from what I wrote today:
He's an excerpt from what I wrote today:
I logged onto my computer and began doing some research on
child custody laws in preparation for my meeting Friday. Jason sent me a text saying not to worry about
dinner because he would bring Papa John’s Pizza. I told him that sounded great to me.
“Why
you got that big, goofy grin on your face?”
I laughed, “What do you mean? “
“I’ve
been watching you the last couple of days.
Just now when you were messaging somebody, you all smiles all of a sudden. You getting some ain’t you?” She said walking
over to my desk.
“Mrs.
Alma!”
“Oh
yes, you’re getting some cause if you weren’t you would have just said no. Maybe you’re about to follow your mom’s
advice and have some babies,” this coming from a woman who didn’t have her
first child until she was 41.
“No ma’am,
it’s not even that serious.”
“Well
whatever, serious or laugh out loud funny, at least you’re getting some.”
“Mrs.
Alma, what am I going to do with you?”
“Pay
me,” she held out her hand. I wrote out
her check and handed it to her. “And I
know you’re getting it from a young man cause old men don’t text, they call.”
She had a point but I didn’t want to tell her that was not
the only reason that he sent text messages.
Not that I was ashamed of him, I just didn’t feel like it was any of her
business. Plus, I still found it unusual
that a guy that young and that handsome was unattached. He was not the quiet choir boy type and he
was definitely not a virgin based on that performance he gave me.
Jason knocked on my door at 6 pm. I took the boxes of pizza and the drink from
him so he could go back to his truck to get the video game. He asked me if I wanted to eat first or play
the game first. I gave him a duh look and he laughed and went over to the sink
to wash his hands. I washed my hands
when he was done and pulled plates and glasses out of the cabinet.
We talked a bit while we ate. He was so animated when he talked that I was
sure if he wasn’t deaf he could of definitely been an actor.
“I had
to go to this lady’s house today and boy was her breath stinky. She was breathing all in my face.”
“She
wanted to kiss you,” I laughed
“With
all that lipstick and her huge teeth, it was creepy like she was gonna eat my head.”
“Oh my goodness. Yeah, she was gonna eat your head alright.”
“I just didn’t know
why she had to get so close to me. I was
like ewwwww.”
“Maybe she thought
that was the only way you would understand what she's saying.”
“Would you want someone with hot and musty breath
mixed with coffee, cigarette smoke, and munchies breathing on you?
“Hell to the no. That’s
gross.”
“For most
people I would need 5 feet of personal space but for her I needed 15 feet.”
I was laughing so hard at him that I almost fell out of my
chair. I’m glad I hadn’t encountered
many funky people in my line of work but of course anything could happen.
After dinner we played all kinds of games. I was kind of a sore loser
so every time I got sick of getting killed or beat up I asked him if we could
play another game. He didn’t seem like
he was irritated but I began to irritate myself after the fifth one.
Friday, November 8, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 8
I wrote 1728 words today so my total word count is a whopping 13482. Get it, girl!
Since I will have a 3 day weekend, I'm hoping to write a lot. Not sure if I'll be able to do that but wishful thinking is fun.
Here's today's excerpt:
Since I will have a 3 day weekend, I'm hoping to write a lot. Not sure if I'll be able to do that but wishful thinking is fun.
Here's today's excerpt:
My mother of all people was sitting behind my desk when I
walked in. I looked over at Mrs. Alma.
“Don’t
say a word to her. If you had called and
said hey, kiss my ass or something, I wouldn’t be here.”
“Mom, I
have work to do.”
“You
always have work to do but I need to talk to you.”
I just stood there and sighed. Mrs. Alma said she had some errands
to run and left. My mom and I never had
the best of relationships because she sent me to live with my aunt when I was
very young and I never knew why. I wasn't the oldest or the youngest so I didn’t get it.
I always wanted to ask her but never wanted to open that can of
worms. We have at least been on speaking
terms a few times out of the year but I had been avoiding her for the last
year.
“Have
you talked to Carl?” Here we go.
“No ma’am
I haven’t and I don’t want to.”
“Why
not he’s a good man and he’s still in love with you?”
“Oh
yeah, I guess you would think a guy that likes to play ping pong with your face
a good man.”
“Girl,
grow up. Everyone gets into it
sometimes. That’s part of life. You’re not getting any younger, Sandra. You need a husband. What about kids?”
“I am
not in a hurry. I want what I want and
I will not settle for just any old dude.”
“Well
when you’re old and lonely you’re gonna wish you had listened to me.”
“Are
you done?”
“You
are the most spoiled, the most ungrateful…”
“Mom,
please. You said what you had to say, but I don’t have to do what you want and
I most certainly don’t have to agree with it.
I’m an adult. Why would you wait
over 30 years to be a mother to me?”
She leaned back in my chair like I had slapped her. “What are you trying to say? I’ve always been there for you.”
“Really
mom really? Last time I checked Aunt Essie was the one who read to me at
night. Aunt Essie was the one that fed
me. Aunt Essie was the one that talked to me about my period and boys and birth control and every single thing I learned
is because of Aunt Essie. Where were you
Mom?”
“I saw
something in you that I couldn’t nurture.
I didn’t have the book smarts and probably not enough common sense to
help you be who you were meant to be.”
I thought that was a bullshit answer but I didn’t say
anything. Mom couldn’t stand the
awkward silence so she got up and walked to me.
“I love
you Sandra. I know people are not
supposed to have favorite children but you are my favorite. If I had kept you, you would have ended up
like your other sisters. You and the
twins are the best kids I’ve ever had.”
Still not a great response but I guessed that was the best
she could do. So I hugged her and
thanked her for coming to see me.
After Mom left, I wanted to call Carl and give him a piece
of my mind but I didn’t feel like being bothered. I texted Jason instead. He responded back asking me what I was up
to. I told him that I needed a stress
reliever and he asked if I wanted to go to the gym. That wasn’t exactly the type of workout I had
in mind but I took him up on the offer.
Thursday, November 7, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 Update ~ Day 7
I was feeling sorry for myself yesterday because I only wrote 524 words. When I woke up this morning I was determined to get back on track and I did. *doing happy dance* Today I wrote 2,174 words bringing my total to 11,754. Yippee skippee!!
Here's today's excerpt:
Here's today's excerpt:
“Hello, Mrs. Hammer, is now a good time for me to come over?”
“No,
mother isn’t feeling well. Can’t you just tell me what you need to say over the
phone?”
I told her that I hadn’t talked to Danny but that I heard
from a friend of his that he was okay.
“Is
that it? You were going to come all the
way here to tell me that? I don’t know what you’re up to…”
“I don’t
live very far from you plus I like handling business face to face whenever
possible. I do apologize if that is an
inconvenience for you.”
“It’s
not so much an inconvenience, I just don’t true a lot of people.”
I wanted to scream laughter in her ear. I couldn’t believe that
statement came from the lips of a woman who was not trusted by her own mother.
“Please
give my well wishes to Mrs. Long. I’ll
be in touch.” Like white on rice baby.
Now that was the kind of woman that drove a person to drink,
not that I needed an excuse. I opened
the fridge and a bottle of apple vodka looked out at me.
I heard you had a main chick, a mistress and some hoes. You be up to no good and everybody knows. My homegirls tried to warn me, they tried to let
me know. But what you got I need a lot so I can’t let you go.
I woke up at 1:00 am covered with sweat. Whew, I had forgotten to turn the air on when
I got home. Those dreams were really starting
to get on my nerves. I couldn’t really
tell who the dream was about because everyone’s faces were blurry. I was at a house party and that J. Cole song
was playing. I was dancing with some
faceless dude and he kept grabbing my ass.
I didn’t know the guy from Adam so eventually I punched him and ran out
of the house. It was very hot outside
and I wasn’t sure where I was running to because nothing around me looked
familiar. All of a sudden a bunch of
women were chasing me telling me to leave they man alone. Before I could find out who they were
talking about I woke up.
Damn, I hadn’t had one man in over a year so I sure hadn’t
had 20. I looked at my phone, still no text from Jason. Maybe my imagination was telling me something
was up with that cat. I guess I would
find out soon enough.
After I got cooled off I climbed back into bed and prayed
that no more dreams would plague me for the rest of the night.
Tuesday, November 5, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 5
Today is day 5 and my word count is 9,056 which means I have 40,944 to go.
At the rate that I'm writing I may finish 2 days early. Now 5 to 10 days early would really make me feel like a billion bucks, but I'm not going to stress myself out too much.
Here's an excerpt from today:
At the rate that I'm writing I may finish 2 days early. Now 5 to 10 days early would really make me feel like a billion bucks, but I'm not going to stress myself out too much.
Here's an excerpt from today:
The truck was in front of my small apartment complex when I pulled
up. I parked and walked to the driver
side.
“Hi, I’m
Sassy Johnson, you looking for me.” The guy didn’t respond. He was reading something and I guess he didn’t
want to lose his train of thought. I
took the opportunity to admire him. My
preference was dark chocolate but he was the tastiest looking piece of caramel
I had ever seen.
“Sassy?”
he asked looking up at me.
“Yep,
that’s me. You got a problem with it?
He looked confused. I
couldn’t help but laugh at his expression.
Then the most beautiful smile spread across that man’s face. I nearly peed my pants.
I stepped aside when he grabbed his bag and put his hand on
the door. He was maybe 3 inches taller than my 5’6. He was weighed between 170 – 180 with
a nice amount of muscle. When he shut the
door I caught a glimpse of that ass. This guy had me turning into a female
version of Brian.
He held out his hand to me,”I’m Jason Quince.”
“I’m so
glad you’re here. I hope you can help a sister out.” He hesitated a minute.
“Yes, I
came to help you.” That smile crossed his face again.
I smiled back. He was looking at my mouth in fact he looked
at my mouth whenever I said anything. I
wasn’t sure if he was admiring my smile or just watching my lips. A thought
crossed my mind. I turned and beckoned
for him to follow me. “I show hope you
give me some of that dick today,” I said making sure my back was to him.
Nothing. I stopped and turned to him.
“What’s
wrong, you forgot your keys?”
“Nope,
I want to ask you a question.”
He face became really serious. “What is it?” There it was
that tell-tale sign in his voice. I had been too busy admiring his body to
notice it at first.
“Are
you deaf?”
He nodded. I didn’t
mean to make him uncomfortable I just didn’t want to assume anything.
“It’s
okay, I was just wondering.” I smiled again to reassure him that everything was
all good.
“Hey, I’m
still good at what I do.”
I put my hand on his shoulder. Oooo nice. “I have no doubt.
Come and fix my computer.” There was
that smile again.
Sunday, November 3, 2013
NaNoWriMo 2013 ~ Day 3
Despite having to feed the kid, do laundry, and help a friend start her car, I was able to write 2,203 words today. I'm really feeling good about that. My total word count to date is 5,624. According to NaNoWriMo.org, if I continue at this rate I will reach my 50,000 words by November 28th. Which is great but I think I'm going to aim for November 20th.
Here's an excerpt from today's writing:
Cars, trucks and SUVs littered the river front parking lot. I had to come up with a way to talk to some people without tapping on windows finding them in various stages of undress. I found a nice empty spot in the middle of the parking lot. A search through my music garnered the perfect party song. ‘Everybody get up….’ I turned the volume up as high as I has I could. People started getting out of their cars a few at a time trying to see what was going on. ‘If you can’t hear what I’m trying to say…” I got out of the car and went around and opened my trunk. Young people liked fancy shiny cars so many of them came over to check out the Corvette. ‘Okay now he was close, tried to domesticate you…” I handed out beers as they walked up. It was strange how some people just took what people gave them without question. Most people liked free stuff. A few girls were dancing and a very tall guy was checking out my car, eyeing me occasionally.
“My 18th birthday next
month,” He yelled as I was driving away. “I’ll give you a call, you know, if I
see DL.” I waved and sped off.
Here's an excerpt from today's writing:
Cars, trucks and SUVs littered the river front parking lot. I had to come up with a way to talk to some people without tapping on windows finding them in various stages of undress. I found a nice empty spot in the middle of the parking lot. A search through my music garnered the perfect party song. ‘Everybody get up….’ I turned the volume up as high as I has I could. People started getting out of their cars a few at a time trying to see what was going on. ‘If you can’t hear what I’m trying to say…” I got out of the car and went around and opened my trunk. Young people liked fancy shiny cars so many of them came over to check out the Corvette. ‘Okay now he was close, tried to domesticate you…” I handed out beers as they walked up. It was strange how some people just took what people gave them without question. Most people liked free stuff. A few girls were dancing and a very tall guy was checking out my car, eyeing me occasionally.
“Where
you get this car from?” He kind of had a LeBron James look about him with the
headband and everything.
“The
dealership,” I answered, holding a beer out to him.
“Not my
brand,” he said walking by me to the other side of the car.
“You want
to sell it?”
“Uh no.
Hey how old are you?”
“Old
enough,” he said walking getting closer to me, invading my personal space.
“Back
off tiger, I’m too good for you,” I said pushing him away. “I was wondering if
you knew this guy.”
He took the picture from me and examined it. “He looks
familiar. Yeah, that’s DL. My football team and theirs are rivals.”
“Have
you seen him recently?”
“Naw,
but I saw his girl, with her fine ass.” He kind of mumbled that last part under
his breath.
I held back a smile.
I took the picture from him and gave him my card. “Give me a call if you see
either one of them. Danny’s folks are looking for him.”
“His
folks?” ‘LeBron’ looked kind of confused. “I heard his mama-nem were dead.”
“His
adoptive family.”
“Oh
yeah, Cruella De Ville.”
A giggle did escape my lips after that statement. That’s who
old girl reminded me of. “He hasn’t been home in a few days and the mother,
Mrs. Long, has been in the hospital ever since.” I closed the empty cooler and
let the trunk down. I heard a few grumbles from the crowd. “I can’t hang out
with yall all night. It’s my naptime.”
“Can I
go home with you?” ‘LeBron’ asked.
“No
sir. You’re not worth me going to jail for.”
“I won’t
tell if you won’t,” The crowd fist pumped and cheered.
I smiled and got in my car. “Maybe
in a few years.”
Sunday, October 16, 2011
No NaNo For Me
Around this time last year, I was getting ready for NaNoWriMo. For those of you that don't know, that's an acronym that stands for National Novel Writing Month. I have several blog posts about it if you want to learn more. Anyway...
I'm not doing NaNo this year for a couple of reasons. Number one, I have three novels in progress in various stages of completion. One of them, I am ashamed to say, has been on my to do list since 2001. Now I've revamped it a number of times by changing the title and practically changing the whole story line to fit what I think someone would really want to read. Quintina Mitchell's story, Her Leftovers, is the book that has plagued me for a decade. From the responses I've been getting to the excerpts that I've posted, I think I have a pretty good story, I've just got to make up in my mind to just be done with it already and let the readers tell me if they like the whole thing.
The other two works in progress are my NaNo projects from the two previous years. Sassy Johnson, the private detective and Cole Slaw, the bounty hunter, have been battling for attention the last couple of years. They both want me to finish their stories ASAP but I haven't because well... I don't know why. Probably because I keep going back to Her Leftovers. So if I can't decide which one of these books to focus on, what's the point of starting another one. Since I like all three main characters, the next book would probably be a part two to one of these projects.
The next reason why I'm not doing NaNo this year is because of my crafting business. It's getting cold and everyone is hounding me about hats and scarves. I've been getting a lot of orders for the jewelry too so my spare time is usually spent surrounded by beads or yarn. It's tiring but I love it. You can check out some of my Youtube videos (www.youtube.com/suzyquzy) and the photos on my Facebook(http://www.facebook.com/susienmccray) page if you want to see the different items I have made.
Speaking of YouTube, I have been trying to document my hair growth since I've been natural. My hair is now longer than it was right before I started growing the relaxer out. My goal is to get it to the length and thickness that it was in high school. I'm almost there, yayyy! Maybe by next May I will have reached my goal, which will be the 2 year anniversary of being completely natural.
Despite all of these things I'm doing besides writing, I still think about writing. Writing was my first love and I will always go back to it (Hence this blog post.) One day I'll slap myself upside the head and complete at least one of these books. If I do it before next October, I will definitely start prepping for NaNo.
Boy
Who can I talk to about adding more hours to my day? Mary J. Blige is loving her man 25/8 (25 hours/8 days a week) so maybe I can get 29/12. Just a thought.
To all of you who will be NaNo-ing this year, I wish you the best of luck.
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Friday, February 4, 2011
Planning Blog Posts with OneNote
For the next few weeks, my short story Saturday segment will focus on a short story that I wrote a few years ago. It’s over 5,000 words long so I’m gonna break it up over the next 4 or 5 weeks. I don’t want the posts to get too long, unless you, my readers, think otherwise. (Of course, I will continue with Quintina’s and Cortez’s story at a later date.)
“To Serve and Protect” is a story that falls into the mainstream/women’s fiction genre even though it is a mixture of drama and romance. The main character, Shanell Parker, is a woman whose perfect world is turned upside down when her husband, Carlos, snaps. The officer that responded, Jeremy Wilkins, and Shanell become friends and more until she decides to give her marriage another try. After a failed reconciliation, Shanell’s leaves for good and rekindles her romance with Jeremy.
To assist me in dividing the parts of the story into “bite-sized” blog posts, I am using Microsoft OneNote.

This is my first time using this software, so I’m still trying to get the hang of it. I plan on dividing “To Serve and Protect” into five parts. Since the story is already written, it’s just a matter of deciding where to stop the story Saturday and where to pick up next week.
As you can see, the first page is my summary. “Part One” and so on, will be the various blog posts. I haven't settled on the titles for each part yet, which is why I don’t have them on the tabs. I plan to use OneNote to work on Her Leftovers as well. For the novel, each tab will be a chapter.
Sometimes I write parts of my stories out of order. Separating the different parts or chapters will make it easier for me to figure out where I want to add a line or even a paragraph. My eyes get kind of crossed trying to figure that out in Word. I like this program because I can save it as a Word document or a PDF once I’m finished or as I go along.
OneNote does a lot of cool and fancy things that I haven’t figured out how to do yet. Believe me, I will.
“To Serve and Protect” is a story that falls into the mainstream/women’s fiction genre even though it is a mixture of drama and romance. The main character, Shanell Parker, is a woman whose perfect world is turned upside down when her husband, Carlos, snaps. The officer that responded, Jeremy Wilkins, and Shanell become friends and more until she decides to give her marriage another try. After a failed reconciliation, Shanell’s leaves for good and rekindles her romance with Jeremy.
To assist me in dividing the parts of the story into “bite-sized” blog posts, I am using Microsoft OneNote.

This is my first time using this software, so I’m still trying to get the hang of it. I plan on dividing “To Serve and Protect” into five parts. Since the story is already written, it’s just a matter of deciding where to stop the story Saturday and where to pick up next week.
As you can see, the first page is my summary. “Part One” and so on, will be the various blog posts. I haven't settled on the titles for each part yet, which is why I don’t have them on the tabs. I plan to use OneNote to work on Her Leftovers as well. For the novel, each tab will be a chapter.
Sometimes I write parts of my stories out of order. Separating the different parts or chapters will make it easier for me to figure out where I want to add a line or even a paragraph. My eyes get kind of crossed trying to figure that out in Word. I like this program because I can save it as a Word document or a PDF once I’m finished or as I go along.
OneNote does a lot of cool and fancy things that I haven’t figured out how to do yet. Believe me, I will.
Thursday, January 6, 2011
Behind the Scene: Her Leftovers
The novel I'm currently working on, Her Leftovers, has been in and out of storage bins in my office since 2001. I've changed the genre of the story twice. The sequence of the events has changed a number of times as well. And finally, after about six titles, I've finally settled on the one that I can live with. The timeline that I created is going to need a major overhaul based on some of the feedback that I've gotten from a couple of my volunteer readers. My best friend even wrote out a whole new storyline, many of the parts I plan to incorporate but others I'll save for the next book. I'm currently at the point where I'm trying to decide if I should tell the story from the viewpoint of Quintina and her husband, Cortez, only or if I should include a few scenes here and there from Tamesha's point of view as well.
Her Leftovers is the story of a young woman, Quintina Mitchell-Robinson, who overcame a rather tough childhood when she lived with her mother as well as easy but strict teenage years under her father's roof. Quintina is kind of a nerd but the people in her life, from her family, to her best friends, to her boyfriend/husband, all have contributed to making her life a lot more entertaining than her comfort zone can handle. The older Quintina gets the more fed up she becomes with the foolishness that goes on around her. Eventually, she stops standing in the background and becomes the leading lady in her own life.
Quintina's struggle to find the perfect man is not an easy path. Every time she thinks she's found the person that she feels she belongs with, she finds out things about them that she is not happy about and knows that she won't be able to deal with.
Cortez Robinson is the type of guy that just doesn't give a ... you know what. He's always in pursuit of temporary pleasures. Drinking, drugs, and chasing women, whatever he feels like doing he does it. He's never been a one woman man and probably never will be. Guys that fall for that okey-doke, in Cortez's opinion, are hen-pecked and he never wants to wear that label.
Tamesha Tate is the woman that always seems to be standing in the way of Quintina's happiness. She believes in doing whatever she feels and really doesn't think about how her actions affect other people. This basically means she's the female version of Cortez. Tamesha is a take charge kind of woman and goes after what she wants even if she decides later on that she didn't really want it in the first place. Sometimes she secretly feels sorry for Quintina but wouldn't dare let on.
I'm going to give myself until October 1st to have a full draft of this story. I'll put it on the back burner during this year's NaNoWriMo and then start editing in December. Then I'll be ready for that long awaited next phase--publishing.
Wish me luck.
Related posts--"Money Funny" & "The Unexpected"
Her Leftovers is the story of a young woman, Quintina Mitchell-Robinson, who overcame a rather tough childhood when she lived with her mother as well as easy but strict teenage years under her father's roof. Quintina is kind of a nerd but the people in her life, from her family, to her best friends, to her boyfriend/husband, all have contributed to making her life a lot more entertaining than her comfort zone can handle. The older Quintina gets the more fed up she becomes with the foolishness that goes on around her. Eventually, she stops standing in the background and becomes the leading lady in her own life.
Quintina's struggle to find the perfect man is not an easy path. Every time she thinks she's found the person that she feels she belongs with, she finds out things about them that she is not happy about and knows that she won't be able to deal with.
Cortez Robinson is the type of guy that just doesn't give a ... you know what. He's always in pursuit of temporary pleasures. Drinking, drugs, and chasing women, whatever he feels like doing he does it. He's never been a one woman man and probably never will be. Guys that fall for that okey-doke, in Cortez's opinion, are hen-pecked and he never wants to wear that label.
Tamesha Tate is the woman that always seems to be standing in the way of Quintina's happiness. She believes in doing whatever she feels and really doesn't think about how her actions affect other people. This basically means she's the female version of Cortez. Tamesha is a take charge kind of woman and goes after what she wants even if she decides later on that she didn't really want it in the first place. Sometimes she secretly feels sorry for Quintina but wouldn't dare let on.
I'm going to give myself until October 1st to have a full draft of this story. I'll put it on the back burner during this year's NaNoWriMo and then start editing in December. Then I'll be ready for that long awaited next phase--publishing.
Wish me luck.
Related posts--"Money Funny" & "The Unexpected"
Friday, January 1, 2010
Curing My Writer's Block
Here is the contest that Janel and I came up with to help us with our creative writer's block.
Novel Finishing and Editing Month (NoFinEdMo)
The 50,000 words that you wrote for NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) was no small feat, so you should be very proud. And if you’re anything like me, this was the largest work you’ve ever written in your whole life. Unfortunately, that number of words is only 200 pages, which is pretty short for a full length novel. You more than likely have a lot of editing to do as well since no one writes a perfect first draft.
If you missed NaNoFinMo (National Novel Finishing Month) that began at the beginning of December and you cannot wait for NaNoEdMo (National Novel Editing Month) which takes place during the month of March, try NoFinEdMo (Novel Finishing and Editing Month).
NoFinEdMo actually covers a 44 day period. The object of NoFinEdMo is to reach 80,000 words (a 320 page novel) by the end of the first 30, which happens to be January this year. The first 14 days of February will go towards the editing process. To track the number of words written or edited, you can go to the Write or Die website and download the progress meter onto your blog or website.
Happy New Year and Happy Writing!!
Doing it big in 2010
Novel Finishing and Editing Month (NoFinEdMo)
The 50,000 words that you wrote for NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) was no small feat, so you should be very proud. And if you’re anything like me, this was the largest work you’ve ever written in your whole life. Unfortunately, that number of words is only 200 pages, which is pretty short for a full length novel. You more than likely have a lot of editing to do as well since no one writes a perfect first draft.
If you missed NaNoFinMo (National Novel Finishing Month) that began at the beginning of December and you cannot wait for NaNoEdMo (National Novel Editing Month) which takes place during the month of March, try NoFinEdMo (Novel Finishing and Editing Month).
NoFinEdMo actually covers a 44 day period. The object of NoFinEdMo is to reach 80,000 words (a 320 page novel) by the end of the first 30, which happens to be January this year. The first 14 days of February will go towards the editing process. To track the number of words written or edited, you can go to the Write or Die website and download the progress meter onto your blog or website.
Happy New Year and Happy Writing!!
Doing it big in 2010
Thursday, December 31, 2009
Creative Brain Freeze
During November, within the NaNoWriMo epidemic, my writing went to great heights. Not only was I writing nearly 1700 words a day (most days), but I was also doing daily blog posts of at least 500 words. I also wrote several 500 to 750 word essays for school during this timeframe. I was a word-spitting writing machine gun. When December came, all of the fight drained out of me and I developed a brain freeze.
I expressed my feelings about my dilemma to my Twitter friends and one of them, Janel Porter {@soulwindow,} came up with the idea of us creating our own contest. We came to the realization that during NaNo it was easy to keep up with our word count because we had a goal. After we had crossed the 50,000 word finish line, our writing was in limbo. So to get out of our creative rut, Janel and I agreed that the month of January would be our month to finish and begin editing our NaNoWriMo novels.
We’re hoping that this will help us change our writing habits by incorporating writing into our daily lives all year round instead of every once in a while.
Wish us luck!!
I expressed my feelings about my dilemma to my Twitter friends and one of them, Janel Porter {@soulwindow,} came up with the idea of us creating our own contest. We came to the realization that during NaNo it was easy to keep up with our word count because we had a goal. After we had crossed the 50,000 word finish line, our writing was in limbo. So to get out of our creative rut, Janel and I agreed that the month of January would be our month to finish and begin editing our NaNoWriMo novels.
We’re hoping that this will help us change our writing habits by incorporating writing into our daily lives all year round instead of every once in a while.
Wish us luck!!
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